Re: Grammatical errors and typos part 4
Posted: June 3rd, 2010, 8:47 am
I get something like "Your boots feel apart..." after destroying them while traveling. This should be "fell apart".
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Jedi_Learner, I think you meant to write "separate".Jedi_Learner wrote:[
- Description of keg underneath Ironpool Dam:
Black powder should be two seperate words.
I disagree. I think that it is appropriate to say "the race of Man", capitalized though.Jedi_Learner wrote:
- Text for book, "Orakur - Of Fact and Fiction":
The word *Orakur* is spelt incorrectly a couple of times.
"Are they malevolent demons seeking to destroy the race of Men, or are they timid..."
I've looked at both of these dialogues and I think they are both fine, having no punctuation within the quotes in either sentence.Jedi_Learner wrote: Introductory dialogue with Mayor Theotus
Introductory dialogue with Mayor Theotus after first encounter
Buckets, Crazybernie, IJBall and anyone else, can you check the two links above and tell me if anything is wrong where the mouse cursor is, or is the dialogue fine?
I'm of the opinion that both of those should have a comma before the 'close' quote, but it's not like my opinion on this is "law" or anything...Jedi_Learner wrote:Version 1.03:
Introductory dialogue with Mayor Theotus
Introductory dialogue with Mayor Theotus after first encounter
Buckets, Crazybernie, IJBall and anyone else, can you check the two links above and tell me if anything is wrong where the mouse cursor is, or is the dialogue fine?
For proper grammatical consistency, we should stick with the American grammar rules. Rules are like laws... sorta.IJBall wrote:I'm of the opinion that both of those should have a comma before the 'close' quote, but it's not like my opinion on this is "law" or anything...Jedi_Learner wrote:Version 1.03:
Introductory dialogue with Mayor Theotus
Introductory dialogue with Mayor Theotus after first encounter
Buckets, Crazybernie, IJBall and anyone else, can you check the two links above and tell me if anything is wrong where the mouse cursor is, or is the dialogue fine?
To my thinking, this should read "LEVEL UP! Click on the flashing level-up button...", or even better "LEVEL UP! Click on the flashing Level-Up button..."LEVEL UP! Click on the flashing level button...
I kind of feel like it does here, for consistency.Jedi_Learner wrote:Version 1.03:
- Test:
Chalice doesn't need to begin with a capital.