I'm trying to figure out a way to make this 'gender neutral', so it's non-specific for male or female... Um, how about:Jedi_Learner wrote:Version 1.03:
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- Information you get after talking to a citizen of Port Kuudad:
The word *them* should be replaced by *him*.
Wouldn't this work better?...This person nods when greeted, but then quickly continues on [down the street(?)]*. Citizens of this large city are not as friendly as those in the smaller villages.
* I'd only use "...down the street" if this blurb is used just for people outside in the city. But I think at least one person inside a house also gets this blurb displayed, in which case "...down the street" should be dropped entirely, or replaced with "...with what they were doing" or something.