Ah yes, your way does sound better. Well, I'm not a native speaker anyway (my usual excuse <grin>).PhilosophiX wrote:It's a straight swap from 'of' to 'a' [and catching the you(r)]
Typos?
A witch doctor isn't nefarious but something like a shaman. Which by the way would be a more fitting title for a druidic magic user than Conjuror, while Conjuror might be more apt for an atheist magic user than Illusionist.PhilosophiX wrote:Shouldn't a nefarious healer be something like Witchdoctor... that would keep the Warlock free for all the fireball hurling.
I was trying to suggest that Necromancer would be a more appropriate title for a nefarious healer than Warlock.
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Porter: Owl's Roost Tavern, you say to him;
"What do you got for sale?"
should be:
"What do you have for sale?"
or
"What have you got for sale?"
"What do you got for sale?"
should be:
"What do you have for sale?"
or
"What have you got for sale?"
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Well you're doing better than most britsVPeric wrote:Ah yes, your way does sound better. Well, I'm not a native speaker anyway (my usual excuse <grin>).PhilosophiX wrote:It's a straight swap from 'of' to 'a' [and catching the you(r)]
Anyway, that was just one of the many that you did get.
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Innkeeper in Blackwater says,
"Greetings to you, guest of Blackater. I am Eeru, owner of the Lonely Spirits tavern. Relax and have a drink! I a room available if you need a bed for the night."
Should it read 'I have a room....?
I checked the other pages and didn't see anyone else report this.
"Greetings to you, guest of Blackater. I am Eeru, owner of the Lonely Spirits tavern. Relax and have a drink! I a room available if you need a bed for the night."
Should it read 'I have a room....?
I checked the other pages and didn't see anyone else report this.
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Help save the earth. It's the only planet with CHOCOLATE!
Help save the earth. It's the only planet with CHOCOLATE!
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William the councilor in Blackwater... once you've completed the quest he gives you he says:
"Well, I've got no worried about it right this minute. Here, let me get you a bit of coin from the city's coffer. You deserve this."
might I suggest: 'coinage' which means coins collectively and would make more sense.
"Well, I've got no worried about it right this minute. Here, let me get you a bit of coin from the city's coffer. You deserve this."
might I suggest: 'coinage' which means coins collectively and would make more sense.
What is a man, If his chief good and market of his time Be but to sleep and feed? a beast, no more. Sure, he that made us with such large discourse, Looking before and after, gave us not that capability and god-like reason to fust in us unused.
Actually, "coin" can be used to describe a number of coins. Ex. "He's got plenty of coin in the bank."PhilosophiX wrote:William the councilor in Blackwater... once you've completed the quest he gives you he says:
"Well, I've got no worried about it right this minute. Here, let me get you a bit of coin from the city's coffer. You deserve this."
might I suggest: 'coinage' which means coins collectively and would make more sense.
I'm more concerned about the first part of the sentence: "Well, I've got no worried about it right this minute."
Should be something like:
"Well, I'm not worried about it right this minute." or
"Well, I've got no worries about it right this minute."
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Good man. That's probably just my own fingers slipping from s to d though, rather than an in game typo, but well spotted. That's what I get for not proofing my own posts.Noceur wrote:Actually, "coin" can be used to describe a number of coins. Ex. "He's got plenty of coin in the bank."PhilosophiX wrote:William the councilor in Blackwater... once you've completed the quest he gives you he says:
"Well, I've got no worried about it right this minute. Here, let me get you a bit of coin from the city's coffer. You deserve this."
might I suggest: 'coinage' which means coins collectively and would make more sense.
I'm more concerned about the first part of the sentence: "Well, I've got no worried about it right this minute."
Should be something like:
"Well, I'm not worried about it right this minute." or
"Well, I've got no worries about it right this minute."
Never heard of coin as plural, but I see you are right.
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