Thanks for the reply BW. Yeah I noted some names were made up (and the grammar of the Latin is sometimes probably wrong too, although I forgot most of that). Somehow the lay-out bothered more than that though. But OK, I won't go on about it
But I do like to say, more generalizing, and especially in reply to "The Noid" that fiction relies for a large part on things in the story that are not fiction. A good fantasy story makes you believe it, if things go too absurd, it is not fun anymore (think L. Ron Hubbard or something).
Trouble is, what is believable is very dependent on the person, and even on the Zeitgeist (watch some very old movies to get the idea).